prezentacja o sobie, w prostym języku
Prace domowe, problemy lingwistyczne

Witam napisałem, prezentację o sobie i bardzo bym prosił o sprawdzenie i ewentualną korektę.

Hi! My name is Michal, I'm 22 years old. I'm studying at Wrocław University of Technology. I'm interesting in music, cars, high-tech and team sports. I live in a small town
- Smardzew. It's in central Poland, about 10km from Łódź. I live with my parents and grandparents in a big one-family house. My mother's name is Aleksandra and my father's name is Witold. And I've got a brother named Szymon
My parents have a big farm, so we've many many work. Working on the farm is really hard, but it's really satisfied. On the farm we have a very flexible working hours. very often in the summer so that we work all night and just relax at noon when it is too hot to work in the field.
My hobbys are fantasy books. I love them. When I'm reading i forgot about the entire world. There is only me and book. Books helps me to de-stress. Usually I'm a calm and balanced man but when someone makes me angry i can
be really unfriendly for him. I'm studying at University of Technology because I love physic and mathematic subjects. In future i want to be a engineer. It's good paid job but it's not as important for me as being satisfied from it.
My dream is to discover a new robot, which could be as good friend as a real human. When i'll find a my dreamed job i'll think about family and my own house with big, beautifull garden.

Hi! My name is Michal, I'm 22 years old. I'm studying at Wrocław University of Technology. I'm interested in music, cars, high-tech and team sports. I live in a small town
- Smardzew. It's in central Poland, about 10km from Łódź. I live with my parents and grandparents in a big one-family house. My mother's name is Aleksandra and my father's name is Witold. And I've got also a brother named Szymon.
My parents have a big farm, so we've got (albo have nie skrócone) a lot of work. Working on the farm is really hard, but it's really satisfing. On the farm we have a very flexible working hours. very often in the summer so that we work all night and just relax at noon when it is too hot to work in the field. (nie bardzo rozumiem to zdanie)
My hobby is reading fantasy books. I love them. When I'm reading, I forgot about the entire world. There is only me and a book. Books helps me to de-stress. Usually I'm a calm and balanced man but when someone makes me angry I can
be really unfriendly to him. I'm studying at University of Technology because I love physics and mathematics. In the future I want to be a engineer. It's a well-paid job but it's not as important for me as being satisfied with it.
My dream is to discover a new robot, which could be as good friend as a real human. When I'll find a my dreamed job, I'll think about starting a family and building/buying my own house with a big, beautifull garden.

Pamiętaj, że -ed to przymiotników dotyczących osób (pol. zakończone na -ny), a -ing dotyczących rzeczy (pol. -cy). Po drugie, 1 os. l.poj. z wielkiej litery!

Dziękuję bardzo.

W tym zdaniu
On the farm we have a very flexible working hours. very often in the summer so that we work all night and just relax at noon when it is too hot to work in the field.

chodziło mi mniej więcej o to:

Na farmie mamy bardzo zróżnicowane godziny pracy. Bardzo często w lecie jest tak, że pracujemy całą noc, a w południe odpoczywamy, gdyż jest zbyt gorąco na pracę w polu.

Jeżeli mógłbym prosić o sensowne tłumaczenie, byłbym wdzięczny.
Pozdrawiam

Aaa widzisz, źle użyłeś zwrotu 'so that', który oznacza 'tak więc'.

Może być tak: In the summer we very often work all night and rest during the day because it's too hot to work in the field.

i wszystko jasne dzięki wielkie :D