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Dear Sir or Madam,

With reference to your recent advertisement on our Intranet, I would like to apply for the position of Sales Manager for Southern and Eastern Europe.

I have been working for Fast-Track as a sales representative since leaving school. During this period, I have the best sales results of the team during the last five years.

In addition, I also have a good knowledge of computing. I have a lot of practice and my occupation give me satisfaction.

As regards my academic background, I finished secondary school and I have diploma in Marketing from the Economical Academy in Katowice.

Finally, I am bilingual in Polish an Russian. Additionally I am good in English vocabulary but not very fluent. I traveling a lot for Europe.

I believe that this combination of practical experience and qualifications makes me an ideal candidate for the Katowice post.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully.

tak na szybko poprawiłbym:
since I finished the school,
my occupation gives me,
I speak English and Russian,
I am good at (nigdy in!!!!),
fluently,
I travelling a lot of Europe? Co miales na mysli? Że podruzujesz duzo po europie? To zmien na ps.
a na koncu mozesz jeszcze dodac:
I am enclosing my CV.

to zdanie w ps ma wyglądać tak:
I traveled a lot on/of(?) Europe ?