Mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić błędy?? - pomoc z angielskiego

I have chosen the topic painting. I want to describe at first the paint by Ben Shawn
The atmosphere of the picture is depressing because of the dark colors. There are a little of the colorful aspects, but they seems more like they fade. The are looking like a rest of the colorful world, which somebody or something have completely destroyed.
In the foreground of picture by Ben Shahn I can see a tree ragged children, exactly girls, on a circular swing. The children are wearing the old dresses. The one of the girls, this in the right button hand, has a black dress. The another two girls are wearing green and red clothes.
In the background I can see a old destroyed building. This is scratch and bent. On the building I can see a rest of colorful wall. In front of the building there are a rubble.
The painting seems like it moves. The heaven in the background together with the cloudy are looking like they moving because of the hard wind. The children are float around of the destruction. They are looking on the shabby place, which I suppose it was their home. They look like very lonely and helpless. They couldn’t change anything .
the picture works like not only the place, the building are the only one, which are destroyed, and which wouldn’t exist any more. But the man, this tree children are loosing their own home, which they love and, where they feel safe and happy. They are looking very scattered and raven. And so do I when I’m looking at this picture.

At right hand there is a short text about “how do you turn catastrophe into art?”.
In this short text Mr. Barnes try to answer this question. In his discussion of the painting he gives the advantages how to understand conflict like f. e. war. The first step in the painting is understand it. Than we have to imagine that what we want to paint. Through the painting we need justify and forgive it. And that’s why did it happen, exactly that made act of the nature. And this is the why how realty comes into story.

Dobrze by było gdybyście wklejali takze polski tekst, bo czasem trudno poprawić błędy nie znając kontekstu oryginału.
Tym razem spróbuje na logikę..

I have chosen the topic painting??. At first I want to describe the painting by Ben Shawn.
The atmosphere of the picture is depressing because of the dark colors. There are little colorful aspects, and they seem more like they fade. They look like the rest of the colorful world, that/which somebody or something have completely destroyed.
In the foreground of picture by Ben Shahn I can see three ragged children, precisely girls, on a circular swing. The children are wearing the old dresses. One of the girls, this in the right button hand ??, has a black dress. The other two girls are wearing green and red clothes respectively.
In the background I can see an old, destroyed building. This is scratch and bent. On the building I can see remnants of a colorful wall. In front of the building there is rubble.
The painting seems like it's moving. The heaven in the background, together with the clouds, are both looking like they're moving because of the hard wind. The children are floating around of the destruction. They are looking at the shabby place, which I suppose was their home. They look very lonely and helpless. They couldn’t change anything .
The picture works like not only the place??, the building are the only one[b], which are destroyed, and which wouldn’t exist any more. But the man (and?) these three children are loosing their own home, which they loved and, where they felt safe and happy (sugeruję czas przeszły ponieważ dom jest zniszczony). They are looking very scattered and raven??. And so am I when I’m looking at this picture.

At the right hand there is a short text about “how do you turn catastrophe into art?”.
In this short text Mr. Barnes tries to answer this question. In his discussion of the painting he gives the advantages how to understand conflict like f. e.?? war. The first step in the painting is understand it??. Than we have to imagine what we want to paint. Through the painting we need justify and forgive it. And that’s why it did happen, exactly that made act of the nature. And this is how realty comes into story.

To co pogrubiłem ze znakami zapytania wymaga tekstu oryginalnego do poprawnego przetłumaczenia i sprawdzenia, bo nietóre zdania mają za dużo błędów..Wklej go to poprawię do końca. Resztę co mogłem bez oryginału sprawdziłem i poprawiłem.

P.S "Trzy" pisze sie "three" a nie "tree".

Pozdrawiam.

NIE mam tekstu orginalnego, bo nigdy nie pisze najpierw po polsku, a potem tlumacze.
ale to to co chciłam w tych pogrubionych zdaniach napisać:
I have chosen the topic painting??- wybrałam temat malarstwo.
this in the right button hand ?? w prawym rogu/po prawej stronie

The picture works like not only the place??, the building are the only one, which are destroyed, and which wouldn’t exist any more.
Ten obraz sprwia jakgdyby nie tylko miejsce czy budek byly jedynymi, które zostały zniszczone i które nie będą już nigdy istnieć.

The first step in the painting is understand it??
pierwszym krokiem w malarstwie to zrozumiec je.
Through the painting we need justify and forgive it.
Popzrez malarstwi musimy je oscenic i wybaczyć.
I powód dlaczego się tak stało, jest właśnie tym, co stworzyło naturę.
And that’s why it did happen, exactly that made act of the nature.[/b]

Skoro piszesz tylko po angielsku tzn. że całkiem dobrze musisz sobie radzić. Gratuluje:)

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As a topic of my work I've chosen painting. At first I want to describe the painting by Ben Shawn.
The atmosphere of the picture is depressing because of the dark colors. There are little colorful aspects, and they seem more like they fade. They look like the rest of the colorful world, that/which somebody or something have completely destroyed.
In the foreground of picture by Ben Shahn I can see three ragged children, precisely girls, on a circular swing. The children are wearing the old dresses. One of the girls, The one in the right corner (lub the one on the right side), has a black dress. The other two girls are wearing green and red clothes respectively.
In the background I can see an old, destroyed building. It is scratched and bent. On the building I can see remnants of a colorful wall. In front of the building there is rubble.
The painting seems like it's moving. The heaven in the background, together with the clouds, are both looking like they're moving because of the hard wind. The children are floating around the destruction site. They are looking at the shabby place, which I suppose was their home. They look very lonely and helpless. They couldn’t change anything .
The picture makes an impression that the building ore the place were not the only ones having been destroyed, and will not exist anymore. The man and these three children are loosing their own home, which they loved and, where they felt safe and happy (sugeruję czas przeszły ponieważ dom jest zniszczony). They are looking very scattered and raving. And so am I when I’m looking at this picture.

At the right hand there is a short text about “how do you turn catastrophe into art?”.
In this short text Mr. Barnes tries to answer this question. In his discussion of the painting he gives the advantages how to understand conflict, like for example - war. The first step, as far as painting is concerned, is to understand it. Than we have to imagine what we want to paint. Through the painting we need to forgive and justify it. And the reason why it all happened, is also the one, which created the nature. And this is how realty comes into story.

Według mnie ostatni akapit trochę zamieszany, nie do końca może spójny myślowo, ale gramatycznie poprawiłem , więc od tej strony powinno być ok.