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I picked up the phone and it was my girlfriend Anna. I talked to her how is it going? She answered it’s ok but something happened. When I was walking through the park a man has approached to me and asked me about new anti-counterfeit trade agreement. He was a journalist. He said. Excuse me are you aware our political situation in the country nowadays? What is acta in your opinion? He scared out of me cause I thought he was a thief or kidnapper. In first second I stood on sidewalk and didn’t say anything. He asked me everything is ok? I answered to him yes everything is fine. I didn’t expect interview in the middle of park. What was the question? What do you think about Acta. Honestly I don’t even know what acta is. He said ok. I will explain you what is this. Meaning Acta in the world is very important for music creators, film’s producers etc. It’s say that everyone who place in internet pirate copies of music and films etc. break the law and should be bring to the justice. Most people will download film or song from internet instead of watch it in the cinema or buy it in the shop. So you are trying to tell me that many people are breaking the law and should go to jail that is right? Yes something like that. I wasn’t enough honest with you. I have heard few words about Acta and I think there are some points that should be clarify. Yes I agree with you he said. First of all internet access provider can’t trail what are you doing on your own computer, this is insane. Would you agree with that? Absolutely you are right. Secondly governments should choose which parts of this agreement are good for us and which are not. I agree that pirates break the law and there is paragraph for it. I mean not everyone is guilty this situation. You share with files that you don’t have any rights for them you are going to the jail, simple. Better idea is lessen cost of buying tracks in the internet, if song will cost less than 1$ I’m sure that you won’t ever see piracy in the world, maybe not all but most. Great idea miss Anna. Ok. Thank you very much for interview I am very grateful for that conversation. The pleasure was mine, thank you to. Bye see you.

handyman napisał(a):
I picked up the phone and it was my girlfriend Anna. I talked to her how is it going? She answered it’s ok but something happened. When I was walking through the park a man has approached to me and asked me about new anti-counterfeit trade agreement.

I asked her how it was going. She answered it was OK but something had happened. She said that while she was walking through the park a man approached to her and asked about a new anti-counterfeit trade agreement.

Jak się kogoś cytuje to się używa cudzysłowu albo reported speach.

When she was walking through the park a man ~~has~~ approached to her and asked her about the new anti-counterfeit trade agreement. He was a journalist. He said: 'Excuse me are you aware of our political situation in the country nowadays? What is acta in your opinion?' He scared the life (hell) out of her cause she thought he was a thief or a kidnapper. In the first second she stood on the sidewalk and didn’t say anything. He asked her if everything was ok. ? I answered to him that everything was fine.

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