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W tym dziale forum poprawimy to co napisałeś, ale nikt nie napisze za Ciebie!

dla leni jest dział Nie chce mi się

Proszę Was o sprawdzenie moich wypocin. I wskazanie mi gdzie mogłabym użyc podanych wyrażeń ( co najmniej 6) bo nie mam bladego pojęcia gdzie to umieścic:
- First Conditional z:
if, unless, provided that, as long as
- Future time clauses z:
when, until, as soon as, by the time, before
I czym idiomy oraz frazale są w mowie formalnej mile widziane?

Dear Editor,

I am writing in response to your article connected with plans of building speedway, which was published in Ostrowiecka's last Monday. I would like to thank you for this text, because now I can take the law into my own hands.

I absolutely agree with your opinion that motorway will be good solutions for our city's problems. If speed way is building, traffic jam and pollution will reduce. Moreover, I also could not agree more with the statement that access to Ostrowiec will be easier and more faster.

On the other hand, I would like to pay your attention to the area, where speedway will build. It will cross through the forest! We ought not forget about innocent animals and protected vegetation, which live there! I am realize highway is necessary, so I would like to give some alternative solution. Road in the forest will be possible as long as animals are safe. One way to do this would be making special crossing over motorway. The next important thing is exact fence of threat areas. Until it do not happened, none works will not be undertake.
Provided that you carry out my request, I will not let special organization about it. I hope you can help me and wildlife.

I wonder what other readers think about this article and I hope you will publish one about bad sides of building speedway.

Yours faithfully,
Alicja XYZ

I am writing in response to your article connected with plans of building speedway, which was published in the '' nazwa gazety''
last monday.

I would like to draw your attention to the area,

unless it happen, none works will not be undertake.

We ought not to forget .
I would like to give some alternative solutions

dziękuje za poprawki, a jakieś propozycje co do wyrażeń ?

może na końcu dodaj

Please contact with me as soon as possible . tylko nie wiem , czy to można umieścić w liście formalnym .