My last Summer Holiday - opisać w 10 zdaniach w past simple. - dział leni

My last Summer Holiday - opisać w 10 zdaniach w past Simple.
Ktoś mi pomoże? Jestem dziewczyną i musi to być parę zdań o moich ostatnich wakacjach. A ja chyba napisałam jako chłopak. Ktoś to sprawdzi i pomoże poprawić te błędy?? Proszę;) Mam to na jutro a nie wiem jak się do tego zabrać;/ z góry dziękuję;*

In this year I spent my holiday in a really nice and cheerful way.
First 2 weeks I stayed in my Grandmorher and then I went for a summer camp. The camp took place in Dziwnowka which is really close to sea. I have been there for 2 weeks and I really enjoyed it. Moreover, I met many nice and interesting people and we become friends.
During that time we lived in a caravans and this was a great experience. In the morning we were going to the beach to get a tan. Then, usually in the afternoon and evening time we were out. We visited some disco clubs and I had there great fun. In the end of Agust I came back home because the summer camp was over. Afterwards, on the Sep I went to the mountains with my parents. We were walking and sightseeing as well. I saw there a Skull Chapel and next we went to Wabierzyce. The weather was really great. It was very sunny all the time and the sky was cloudless.
The rest of my free days I spent at home. I were meeting with my friends, playing volleyball and cycling with them. In some cloudly days I watched Tv and played on my computer.

This year I spent my holiday in a really nice and cheerful way.
First 2 weeks I stayed at my grandmother's and then I went on a summer camp. The camp took place in Dziwnowka, which is really close to the sea. I have been there for 2 weeks and I really enjoyed it. Moreover, I met many nice and interesting people and we became friends.
During that time we lived in a caravans and that was a great experience. In the morning we used to go to the beach to get a tan. Then, usually in the afternoon and evening we went out. We visited some disco clubs and I had great fun there. At the end of August I came back home, because the summer camp was over. Afterwards, in September I went to the mountains with my parents. We were walking and sightseeing as well. I saw there the Skull Chapel and next we went to Wabierzyce. The weather was really great. It was very sunny all the time and the sky was cloudless.
The rest of my free days I spent at home. I was meeting with my friends, playing volleyball and cycling with them. On some cloudly days I watched Tv and played on my computer.