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Dear Tom!
Hi, how are you? It was a nice surprice to hear from you again after so many months. In this e-mail I would like to tell you about my school. My school is quite big. Around the school is lot of greenary and two playgrounds. In my school there are three gyms, a library, a small shop, a canteen, three informatic rooms with modern computers and languagelabs. Close by a gym there are cloakrooms. My favourite subjects are maths, physics, chemistry and PE, on which we play in volleybal and basketball. I am good at science. One the subject, which i do not like is the History, because I do not learning by heart. My favourite teachers are Mrs Beata Czewonka, Mrs Monika Cyran, and Mr Wojciech Krycka, bacause they are nice and helpful. I always can count on them. I usually have six or seven lessons. In my schoool are extra classes , for example: mathematical, chemical, biological. I go only on the chemical, where we do experience. I have a lot of fomework every day. In my school we do not wear unifors. In winter we can not go outside. Both teachers and student look after the school and their classrooms. Classes are spacious and neat. Pupils can pleasantly spend thetime at school, talk with friends, laugh. Various competitions are organized at schhol. The friendly atmosphery is the trump of my school. Well, that is all for now. Looking forward to hearing from you. Lots of love. Sylwia

Dear Tom!

How are you? It was a nice surprise to hear from you again after so many months. In this e-mail I would like to tell you something about my school. My school is quite big. There is a lot of greenness around the school and there are two playgrounds. In my school there are also three gyms, a library, a small shop, a canteen, three computer rooms with modern computers and languagelabs. Close to the gym there are cloakrooms. My favourite subjects are maths, physics, chemistry and PE, on which we play volleybal and basketball. I am good at science. The only subject, which I do not like is history, because I do not like learning by heart. My favourite teachers are: Mrs Beata Czewonka, Mrs Monika Cyran, and Mr Wojciech Krycka. I like them because they are nice and helpful. I can always count on them. I usually have six or seven lessons a day. At my school you can do some extra classes as well, for example: mathematics, chemistry, biology. I only attend the chemistry classes, where we do experiments. I have a lot of homework every day. At my school we do not wear uniforms. In winter we are not allowed to go outside. Everybody, the teachers and the students look after the school and their classrooms. Classes are spacious and neat. Pupils can spend their time at school in a very pleasant way, talk to friends, laugh. There are also various competitions organized at my school. Friendly athmosphere is a trump of my school. Well, that is all for now.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Lots of love.

Sylwia

[ Dodano: Wto Kwi 06, 2010 19:03 ]
Classrooms are spacious and neat. Pupils can spend their time at school in a very pleasant way, talk to their friends, laugh. There are also various competitions organised at my school. Friendly athmosphere is a trump of my school. Well, that is all for now.

Sylwia,

I have changed this bit as well. I haven't noticed some mistakes before. But it is not bad anyway.

All the best :),

Natalia