Recenzja "10 thinks I hate about you" - są błędy? - pomoc z angielskiego

Potrzebne mi jest to do przyszłego pon i nie wiem czy dobrze mam to napisane. Mile widziane uwagi co mogę poprawić i czy są w tym jakieś błędy. Z góry dziękuję wszystkim.

On last Saturday night at 7 p.m. on TVP1 I watched great comedy, which was called:
"10 things I hate about you". It is set in a small town among students secondary-
school and it is about two girls (Bianca and Kat) who are sisters and they are differing in everything. Bianca is seemingly typical blonde. She is pretty, naive, likes good fun and good-looking boys. Kat is inaccassible, mean and unsocial. She doesn't care about this what people say about her. Sisters have father who is maniac (in positive meaning) who after death his wife decides to bring up their daughters by himself. He wants implement rigid principles only for theirs own good. He fixes base "first and second of the most important in this house", which say: Bianca and Kat couldn't go out with boys till secondary-school final examination. But Bianca was very popular in school what her father notices and he knows that he can't control her all the time, so he changes base. This time base says: Bianca can go on dates only then Kat go on dates too. This base seemes very effective, because Kat more deter than attract boys.
To school where both girls learn, comes new boy - Cameron who at once falls in love with Bianca. Unfortunately, he must finds someone who will be start meeting with Kat, becaouse he wants go out with Bianca. He must prove that he belong to group "cool guys" too. And here appear problem...
Plot is locations gripping and exciting. The dialogues are funny and realistic.
The whole film is perfect cross-section accross the school community. They are potential killers, future businessmen or scientists. Of course school it is not only students. We can see great Miss Perky - school's psychologist who thinks more about her novel than about students' businesses or Mister Morgan who leads with unusual eagerly poetry's lessons. In film most of heros has change. Seemingly unfeeling Kat turns out very emotional and lost person.
Bianca from overconfident in self blonde changes in very tolerant and tender person. Michael, Cameron's friend, who wantes stay the life and soul of a party, showes, that his only dream is true love and for it can do everything.In film starring famous and great actors: Heath Ledger, Julia Stiles and Larisa Oleynik. Acting is convincing performace a weak. The school and students are very realistic. Scenes are interesting, funny, sometimes very touch. Costumes are realistic. Whole film includes many soft jokes, misunderstandings and many other "catches" which cause that we all the time want return to this film many times. It's really worth to see! I recommend it!