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Proszę o sprawdzenie tego listu. bardzo prosze :prosi:

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Dear Matt,
How are you? You didn`talready write to me a long time. I was glad very much when I received a letter from you.I`m a bit down, because I`mbusy on Christmas. I`d love to, but Ican`t. Sorry, but I`ve got to spend time with the family. I must visit my grandmother which lives alone, so that she doesn`t feel alone.
I can`t wait until Christmas. This year we are going to buy 2-one-metre long christmas tree. I and my brother are decorating it into the Christmas Eve. My mum is preparing 12 Christmas dishes. Supper Christmas Eve we are eating at 5 p.m. in grandmother home with the auntie and uncle, then we are going to the midnight Mass. We are visiting The Zosię sister mum and her family, in the afternoon we are entertaining guests. I was wondering if you`d like to spend this time with us. It is a good idea, because we will be able to spend a lot of time together. And on top that you will get to know my family. Why don`t we tour my city? I will you show interesting places, we will have a nice time in the club and unforgettable moments with my cousins. I would want very much you to agree.
I hope that they will be these are our most wonderful Christmas in the life. I ask for the response.
I am greeting warmly.

prosze o szybka odp, bardzo mi zalezy :stres: :prosi: :prosi:

Dear Matt,

How are you? You haven't written to me for a long time. I was so glad when I received a letter from you. I`m a bit down, because I`m busy on Christmas. I`d love to come to you, but I can`t. Sorry, but I have to spend Christmas with my family. I must visit my grandmother who lives alone, to make her feel loved and happy.

I am looking forward to Christmas time. This year we are going to buy 2-metre high christmas tree. I and my brother will decorate it on the Christmas Eve. My mum will prepare 12 traditional dishes. On the Christmas Eve we usually eat dinner at 5 p.m. at grandmother's home with the auntie and uncle. Then we go to the midnight Mass. On the Christmas Day we visit mum's sister Zosia and her family, and in the afternoon we invite guests.

I was wondering if you`d like to spend Christmas with us. It is a good idea, because we will be able to spend a lot of time together. And above all you will get to know my family. Why don`t we tour my city? I will show you interesting places, we will have a nice time in the club and unforgettable moments with my cousins. I'll be so grateful if you agree. I am sure it will be our most wonderful Christmas in life.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon

Best wishes

xyz

[ Dodano: Nie Lis 22, 2009 11:44 ]
Celem komentarza:
- do pisania o rutynowych czynnościach jak np przygotowania do świąt używa sie present Simple

- jeśli coś jest zamiarem jak np. w tym roku kupimy 2metrową choinke można to wyrazić w formie to be going to

- nie mogę się doczekać to : I am looking forward to sth/ doing sth

- Pozdrowienia na koniec listu prywatnego to : with love / best wishes/ Yours

- żeby wyrazić że oczekuje się na odpowiedź to pisze sie: I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon i to znaczy : czekam na kilka słów od ciebie