I, my family an my friends - pomoc z angielskiego

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My name is Krzysztof and i was born in 1985 in Tychy. I have twenty-four yers
old. I'm study in Myslowice and I live every day in Bierun. I have dark hair and
blue eyes. I like swimming, football and music. Sometimes I go to the cienma but
usually I watch movies at home in TV or DVD. I think I'm nice and frendly person.
My family is very important for me. Members of my family are my best friends, the people I love. It would be dreadful for me if I lost them.
My family help me sometimes in many problems, make me fell necessary.
I can rely on my parents – they often give me advice. Besides, my family support
( pay for my living ) until I find a job and I have my own flat.
I have an older brother, his name is Gregory. He is 31 years old .
He is very helpful person and I can always rely on him. Sometimes we fight with
each other but I think that it is normal between brother. I love my brother.
We often use the computer or play computer games together.
My mother is Leokadia and she is 57 years old. She works as a nurse in our
local hospital. She really likes her job.
My father is 58 years old and his name Teofil. He is a elektromonter in Fiat
Auto Poland. He likes his job because he loves autos.
He always helps ma and my brother with our homework. There is one more member of our family, a big dog Rex. We really love him. I really like my family
and I care about them.

My the best friend is my mother. We live together. She has short black hair
and blue eyes. She is very intelligent person. I tell her all my secrets.
She always help me and I help her. I like tall and spend time with my mother.
She always prepare the best food. She loves cooking especially for me and
my brother. We've got a lot in common – like me she loves listenig to music,
reading books, going to the cinema and doing some gardening – she has
green fingers. I love going shopping with her- she always makes my day. I really
respect her, because she keeps clear of alcohol, drugs and cigarettes.

My name is Krzysztof and i was born in 1985 in Tychy. I am twenty-four years
old. I study in Myslowice and I live permanently in Bierun. I have got dark hair and
blue eyes. I like swimming, football and music. Sometimes I go to the cienma but usually I watch movies/films at home in TV or DVD. I think I'm nice and friendly person.
My family is very important for me. Members of my family are my best friends, people whoI love. It will be dreadful for me if I lose them.
Sometimes, my family help(s) me if I have problems, thanks to them I fell necessary.
I can alwaysrely on my parents – they often give me valuable advice. Besides, my family support(s) me
( pay for my living ) until I find a job and I have my own flat.
I have got an older brother, his name is Gregory. He is 31 years old .
He is very helpful person and I can always rely/count on him. Sometimes we fight with
each other but I think that it is normal between brother. I love my brother very much. I'm proud of him
We often use the computer or play computer games together.
My mother is Leokadia and she is 57 years old. She works as a nurse in ourlocal hospital. She really likes her job.
My father is 58 years old and his name Teofil. He is a elektromonter in FiatAuto Poland. He likes his job because he loves cars
He always helps me and my brother with our homework. There is one more member of our family, a big dog Rex. We really love him. I like my family and I care about them.

My the best friend is my mother. We live together. She has got short black hair
and blue eyes. She is such an intelligent person. I tell her all my secrets and I know that she'll never give away them
She always help me and I help her. I like talkand spend time with my mother.
She always prepares the best food. She loves cooking especially for me and
my brother. We've got a lot in common – like me she loves listenig to music,
reading books, going to the cinema and doing some gardening – she has
green fingers. I love going shopping with her- she always makes my day. I really
respect her, because she keeps clear of alcohol, drugs and cigarettes.

Poprawiłam błędy tak jak MOIM ZDANIEM być powinno...

Dzięki za wcześniejszą pomoc!

Mam jeszcze sprawę- jak napisać po angielsku:

1. Mój brat ma potężną budowę ciała i jest wyższy ode mnie. Ma czarne włosy i zielone oczy. Lubi bardzo korzystać z życia z każdej przyjemnosci i wolnego czasu. Jest osobą bezkonfliktową i wyrozumiałą. Nie oddał bym go za nic w świecie

2. Mój tata jest osobą odpowiedzialną i bardzo konkretną. Lubi pomagać drugim osobom. Jest niższy ode mnie. Ma czarne włosy i brązowe oczy. Bardzo go cenie za wszystkie dobre rady. Nie wyobraźam sobie nie mieć go

3. Natomiast mama jest brunetką o pięknych i dużych zielonych oczach oraz jest wspaniałym aniołem. Oprócz pracy zajmuje się domem, robi pyszne obiady, ciasta i wiele innych pyszności. Ze wszystkim umie sobie poradzić w życiu wzorowo. Ma same zalety! Kocham ją najbardziej na świecie za to, że jest obok mnie każdego dnia i pomaga mi we wszystkim o co ją poproszę.

Będę bardzo wdzięczny za pomoc w przetłumaczeniu mi tego tekstu!!!

1. My brother is well-built and he is taller than I. He has got black hair and green eyes. He likes use/using: life (lub He enjoies freedom), every pleasure and his free time. He isn' t confrontational person and he is understanding. I will not give him to somebody for the biggest money (zmieniłam to zdanie, bo nie wiem jak przetłumaczyć oryginał).

2. My father is so responsible and concrete. He likes help(ing) other people. He is shorter than I. He has got black hair and brown eyes. I respect him for all good advice. I can't imagine my life without him.

3.However my mother is brunette and she has got beautiful, big and green eyes and ahe is angel. Apart from that she works, ahe cooks delicious dinners, cakes and other goodies. She always copes with everything . She has (got) only virtues. I love her very much, beacuse she is next to me every day and she helps me if I need her help.

Trochę gdzieniegdzie pozmieniałam.
Nie wiem, czy nie ma błędów.