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» kasiulek91
(Born-7)
Wto Mar 24, 2009 21:47
Wypracowanie o kosmosie - mógłby ktoś zerknąć?
Witam. Miałam napisać wypracowanie, a w zasadzie opowiadanie o kosmosie i byłabym wdzięczna jeśli ktoś mógłby mi to sprawdzić (zapewne jest sporo błędów z czasami, bo zawsze mi się mylą...). Oto ono:
As we admired cosmos landscapes, something in our spacecraft broken. We heard strange noise which extractioned on the engine. We must touch down but Earth was so far away therefore we risked and we landed on nameless planet. Having left the spacecraft, we looked amazing sight! On the right has been flown the longest river which I've ever seen but what was the most strange it was the colour of blood. Behind this stood a large, blue mountain in the shape of huge pyramid. Upon mountain was the green moon which lighted all environmen. We were seing on this in opened mouth.
When our mechanic started repair an engine we took breathing equipment, guns and siencist facilities and we've been going in mountain. Before mountain grow up blue vegetables which looked like earths cactuses. After seeing flowers, we decided that we clambed on a mountain. Suddenly cactuses 've been shooting to us. We were very astonished but also we must as quick as it was possible thought decision what we should doing. We' ve had two resolutions: run away or depended and we chosed second option.
I said "already" because it was signall to attack and we've started firing. Our working was sensless because cactuses stood immovable shooting to us wihtout a break. As our mechanicc heard the noise, ha came to us with few bootles of benzine. We poured substances on cactuses and burnt it. After flameing vegetables , cube opened and transpired that we weren't here alone. We must escaped! Aliens started chase us but we get at spacecraft in the last moment. As a spacecraft moved, we heave a sigh of relief.
THE END!!!:)
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